Friday, June 29, 2012

FRIDAY, JULY 29TH, 11:30 AM


Greetings,

Below you will find a survey/questionnaire that you need to print out and complete and bring to class on Tuesday. It is considered Packet 9. 

Have a wonderful and safe weekend.




PLEASE do not put your name on this feedback form.
ENGLISH 20, SUMMER 2012
Since this is only the 5th semester I have tried a different approach to teaching English 20, I highly value your honest and very specific feedback.

1.     What did you find of value in watching the first season of Breaking Bad? If you found nothing of value, I would like to know as well. Be as articulate as possible.








2.     Is there any other television series that you know of that you feel might be an interesting one to examine closely and extract themes to discuss and write about in this course?


3.     What are you opinions about the three out of class essays?

·      Essay 1 (voices against conformity):



·      Essay 2 (a family’s adjustment to a challenging situation):



·      Essay 3 (in depth character analysis):



4.  What is the best thing about this semester’s course?




5.  What is your least favorite thing about this semester’s course?




6.  Other comments/suggestions on any aspects of the class. 

Monday, June 25, 2012

Monday, June 25, 2012, 9:45 am

Greetings,

Packet #8
"Sexual Abuse in Immigration Detention"
http://www.aclu.org/sexual-abuse-immigration-detention

(please note: the article includes three first hand narratives of three women--Raquel, Sarah and Kimberly. Read their complete stories as part of the packet.)

Friday, June 22, 2012

Friday evening, June 22, 2012...10:20 pm

Greetings...wishing all of you a great weekend. Be safe.


Packet #7 Assignment (one article and one video):

http://blogs.alternet.org/speakeasy/2010/04/19/human-trafficking-mixing-up-views-on-immigration-to-the-united-states/

http://www.ted.com/talks/sunitha_krishnan_tedindia.html

Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Wednesday, June 20th, 830 pm


Good evening, 
below you will find a copy of the handout distributed in class today. See you tomorrow.


English 20, Summer 2012, Instructor: C. Fraga

Out of Class Essay Assignment #3 (200 points)
Assigned: Wednesday, June 20
Optional Rough Draft Due: no later than Tuesday, June 26
Due: Tuesday, July 3 (NOTE: THIS IS A REVISED DUE DATE)
(reminder—you will not be able to revise this essay)

Requirements:
• MLA format
• If you utilize any outside sources (not required) you must follow MLA format for in- text citations, Works Cited page, etc.
At the very least, you must have a Works Cited page that lists Season 1 of Breaking Bad.
• Attach your Viewer’s Journal (all 7 entries) to back of essay when submitting.

Before we began viewing the first season of Breaking Bad, I assigned a Viewer’s Journal. You were to record your observations and any other notes you wished in order to eventually select a character to focus on more carefully than others. However, as we have discussed, your first few journal entries, or perhaps more than a few, might just be summary plots and notes regarding several different characters.

This Viewer’s Journal will now be a valuable source as you write your last out of class essay for this course.

Assignment:
Write an in-depth character analysis of one of the characters in the first season of Breaking Bad.

Your essay must include the following:
• Assertion(s) about your character
• Evidence from the episodes that support your assertions (how did you come to the conclusion(s) you did regarding this character?)

Your supportive evidence might include but is not limited to:
• what others observe/say (or don’t observe/say) about the character—either directly or in private
• the actions of the character in particular situations
• the reactions/responses of the character in particular situations
• what drives this character
• what terrifies this character
• what pleases this character
• what does this character long for
• what does this character need

Your thesis must be assertive…it is YOUR opinion as a viewer of these episodes.

·      Whether or not you LIKE or DISLIKE this character is not an issue in this essay.

·      Whether you LIKE or DISLIKE the series is also not an issue in this essay.

Proving to the reader that this character has the attributes (good, bad, layered, shallow) that you assert he or she has is your goal.

Keep in mind that your reading audience HAS viewed each of the seven episodes so avoid writing extensive summaries of each episode.

Your thesis might read something like this:

Once Walter learns of his terminal cancer and begins cooking meth, he appears very unstable and irresponsible; however, his behavior truly represents a very determined, loving, highly intelligent and moral father and husband.

or…

Marie is a very insecure and lonely woman who is unhappy and uncomfortable living in the shadows of her power-driven DEA husband and her happily married and very bright sister, Skylar.

Tuesday, June 19, 2012

Tuesday, June 19th, second posting of the day

Hi again,
a few adjustments for the final two and a half weeks of the course. Here is a revised schedule.


Tuesday, June 26
·      Out of class essay #3 ROUGH DRAFT due today (OPTIONAL)
·      Reading Packet #7
·      Arrive in class having read one of the four sections in Part III of the Handbook: Writing Across the Curriculum at Sacramento State. Select the section that “fits” your major field of study. If you have not yet declared a major, select the one that BEST fits what you THINK your major will be. (Your choices are: Natural Sciences and Math; Social Sciences; Arts and Humanities; or Business and Professional Communications.)

Wednesday, June 27
·      Reading Packet #8
·      WR #4 in class
·      Discussion of WPJ—How to prepare & what to expect

Thursday, June 28
      ·      In class essay #2 (WPJ Practice)

Tuesday, July 3
·      Reading Packet #9
      ·      Out of Class Essay #3 due today

Wednesday, July 4
·      No class, 4th of July holiday

Thursday, July 5
·      Last day of class; grade roster check

Tuesday late afternoon, June 19th

Greetings...a few reminders...

1. Remember to bring your "Musings on Immigration"assignment tomorrow to class. Typed, double spaced and NO NAME. I cannot accept this assignment via email, so be sure to plan ahead and have it printed.

2. Those of you who submitted revisions of Essay 1 today...only one of you submitted correctly...:)
I will be returning those who submitted incorrectly so you can "fix" and re submit. There are instructions on the course outline on how to submit a revision and I also posted a reminder a week ago or so about the guidelines for revision submission.

3. Those of you who plan to revise Essay 2, the first revision is due to me no later than next Tuesday, June 26th.

4. I will be making a few changes and adjustments to the class schedule. Stay tuned later this evening and I will post the changes.

Friday, June 15, 2012

Friday, June 15, 2012...830 pm

Greetings. Below is the assignment for Packet 6. We will be focusing on some of the elements and issues of immigration for the next few weeks. The topic does not become a prominent or central issue until later seasons of Breaking Bad, yet in this first season we begin to see undertones of the issue.

Enjoy your weekend, be safe, stay cool. See you Tuesday.


PACKET #6 (due to be viewed and/or read by Tuesday, June 19th)


1.  http://www.myimmigrationstory.com/WYSO%2090%20SEC.mp3
(under two minute audio)

2. "Illegal Immigrant Deaths Set Record"
http://www.npr.org/player/v2/mediaPlayer.html?action=1&t=1&islist=false&id=130369998&m=130370353
(audio)

3.  "Obama's Immigration Policy--What it Means"
http://www.latimes.com/news/nationworld/nation/la-na-immigration-questions-20120616,0,4472636.story

4. "Could you Pass a U.S. Citizenship Test?
http://www.csmonitor.com/USA/2011/0104/Could-you-pass-a-US-citizenship-test/Who-signs-bills
(Please take this on line test and write a minimum one paragraph response, revealing your score and your reaction to the test and your score. This must be typed.)

5. "Pros and Cons of Illegal Immigration"
http://immigration.procon.org/view.resource.php?resourceID=000842


Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Wednesday, June 13th, 5:30 pm

Greetings,

Just a few reminders...

1. If you choose to revise out of class essay #1, the first revision is due no later than Tuesday, June 19th. Please attach the revision to the original, graded version before submitting.

2. If you submitted a rough draft of out of class essay #2, please remember to attach it to the final version before submitting tomorrow in class.

Thank you! See you tomorrow.

Thursday, June 7, 2012

Thursday, June 7th--second posting of the day

PACKETS 4 AND 5 ARE LISTED BELOW:


The issue of health care certainly rears its head in the Breaking Bad episodes. It seems fitting that the series features an ordinary high school chemistry teacher whose health care benefits do not cover his treatments for lung cancer. He is desperate to get money for his treatments and to leave money for his family in the event of his death. 

PACKET #4:

Please read the article (just published this afternoon) below that I have cut and pasted, along with the other two listed afterwards.



U.S. administration ready for health ruling: Sebelius

3:07pm EDT
WASHINGTON (Reuters) - Health and Human Services Secretary Kathleen Sebelius said on Thursday the administration will be ready to respond if the Supreme Court strikes down all or part of the healthcare reform law in a landmark ruling expected this month.
Speaking at a White House forum on the law and women's health issues, Sebelius said the administration remains "confident and optimistic" that the 2010 Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act will be upheld as constitutional.
But if the ruling proves unfavorable, she added: "We'll be ready for court contingencies." Sebelius offered no details about how the administration would respond.
The reform law, President Barack Obama's signature domestic achievement, would extend coverage to more than 30 million uninsured people by expanding the Medicaid program for the poor and establishing regulated state insurance markets where lower income people could buy subsidized plans.
The court could overturn the entire reform package or eliminate selected provisions including the individual mandate, which requires most Americans to obtain health coverage by the time the law comes into full effect in 2014.
If the court strikes down the mandate, considered a pivotal issue in the case, that could cripple the law's ability to keep insurance costs down by compelling younger, healthier people to buy coverage.
Most alternative ways to bring down insurance costs would require cooperation from Congress, an uncertain prospect as many Republicans have vowed to try to repeal the law.
Sebelius warned that the court striking down the entire law would have a "pretty cataclysmic impact" on millions of people, including 60,000 with pre-existing conditions who have been able to gain health coverage through a program created by the law.
The government would have to establish new rates for Medicare, the popular healthcare program for the elderly and disabled, because higher payment rates for physicians who provide preventive and primary care would cease to exist.
Millions of young adults would no longer be able to remain on their parents' health plans until age 26, and a host of preventive procedures including mammograms and childhood immunizations would no longer be available without deductible payments or co-pays, she said.
"We assume that if the court would strike that down, those all would cease to be the law of the land," Sebelius said.
"What we're doing right now, quite frankly, is just working as hard as we possibly can to get ready for 2014," she added. "We think it's the best preparation to anticipate that the law is fully constitutional."



"Middle Class Struggling with Health Care Costs, Report Finds"
http://www.post-gazette.com/pg/10077/1043764-84.stm

"Why Does Health Care Cost so Much?"
http://www.newamerica.net/node/8920

Just a quick note...

When you are accessing these two required readings above, please make a note that the article titled
"Middle class struggling with health care costs, report finds" is the one I want you to read. It is an article by David Templeton from the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette. It is the link I gave you, but just in case you notice another listing when you google this title, it may be the entire PDF of the report. I do not want you to read the entire report, just the article ABOUT the report.


PACKET #5:
"Abraham Verghese: A Doctor's Touch"--TED TALKS
http://www.ted.com/talks/abraham_verghese_a_doctor_s_touch.html

Thursday, June 7 around 530 pm

Hello, below you will find a copy of the out of class essay #2 assignment which was assigned in class today. Check in later this evening for your next reading packet assignment.
Have an outstanding weekend!


English 20, Summer 2012---C. Fraga

Date assigned: Thursday, June 7
Rough draft (optional): due no later than Tuesday, June 12
Final draft due: Thursday, June 14

Details:
1. MLA format
2. At least 4 outside sources on your Works Cited page
3. Please, no Wikipedia
4. No formulaic, 5 paragraph essay

OUT OF CLASS ESSAY ASSIGNMENT #2
Among many things, the series Breaking Bad focuses on the family entity and what happens when something quite extraordinary occurs—how do members of the family cope, adjust, and/or “deal” with the event/situation? (In the case of this series, obviously it is Walter’s cancer that is the ‘event’).

I am not referring to the everyday “bumps in the road” that occur for all families. Instead, I am asking you to consider the family unit when faced with an especially challenging situation. These situations could include but are not limited to:
• death
• birth
• infidelity
• serious injury
• dementia
• serious illness
• divorce
• unemployment
• new employment
• moving to a new home/state/area/country
• the return of a war veteran
• moving BACK home after initially moving OUT
• alcoholism
• drug abuse

Select ONE situation that you are most interested in exploring. You will conduct research (and possibly personal interviews, if possible) in order to write an essay that offers the reader background on the topic and makes an assertion about what elements impact a family in the most challenging of ways and supports it logically and interestingly.

Your thesis might read something like this:

When a family member develops dementia, the challenges are often devastating, yet the disease definitely impacts family members more than the dementia patient.

Or…

When a couple divorces, it most certainly impacts the children still living at home; however, it is the older children who have already moved away that are most affected by the split.





Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Wednesday, June 6th, 2nd posting today

Hello,

just a quick correction I wanted to draw your attention to in the syllabus.

I just noticed that I indicated an In Class Group Work #2 for today -- AND AGAIN on Tuesday the 12th. If you would, just cross out In Class Group Work #2 on the 12th. Thanks.

Wednesday, June 6, 12 noon

Greetings,

I apologize for not mentioning that the REASON we ended our class session early today was to provide you with a bit more time to finish up your out of class essay #1. I cannot always afford to give you this opportunity, but today's list of lessons afforded that luxury.

Also, I have just completed reading over your group notes from the Group Work #2 today. I am really impressed with many of the discussion points, both the ones I read and the ones I heard while you were in your groups. My goal is for you to understand the PROCESS of writing and how vital it is to brainstorm and discuss and think about and read before committing to your MAIN focus and assertion. The insights that I observed from your discussions are encouraging to me.

See you tomorrow...with your blue or green book.

Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Tuesday evening, June 5th

Greetings...
A few things.
1. Remember to bring copies of Packet 2 and Packet 3 to class tomorrow.
2. If you submitted a rough draft of Essay 1, you will receive it back tomorrow with my comments and suggestions. Please ATTACH this rough draft with my comments to your FINAL draft when you submit on Thursday.
3. Remember to bring a blue or green book to class on Thursday for in class essay #1. I encourage you to also bring along your Viewer's Journal from Breaking Bad. You may find it useful.

Sunday, June 3, 2012

Sunday, June 4th, 9 pm

Greetings,

I hope you have had a safe, enjoyable weekend.

A few things before we meet again on Tuesday...

1. IF you are submitting a rough draft of out of class essay #1, please be sure it is typed, double spaced, and follows MLA format. You need not submit a Works Cited page with your draft, but please have in text citations in place. Also, I cannot provide sufficient feedback unless your essay is complete--in other words, do not submit a partially written essay. I realize that it is in rough format and may not be completely developed throughout, but it should have a beginning, middle and end.

2. Remember to have the readings due for Tuesday in hard copy or on your laptop.

3. Packet 3 Assignment (due to be read by Wednesday's class session) :

Should Drugs be Legalised? (June 2011--one year ago)

In the Independent, the UK's politically neutral and arguably most informative daily newspaper, there has been some interesting articles and debates regarding calls to legalise some or all drugs as the so called 'War on drugs' has undoubtedly failed.

So says a panel of world leaders who called yesterday for the biggest shake-up of drug laws in half a century. "The global war on drugs has failed, with devastating consequences for individuals and societies around the world," declared the Global Commission on Drug Policy. "Fundamental reforms... are urgently needed."

The Commission, which counts the former UN Secretary General Kofi Annan along with former presidents of Brazil, Mexico and Colombia as members, believes governments must now experiment with "legal regulation of drugs."

Ecstasy, which is currently considered a class-A substance, ought to be reclassified in line with medical opinion that it is far less dangerous than legal drugs such as nicotine and alcohol, the report suggests. Users of narcotics should be offered education and treatment, rather than being incarcerated, it advises. And countries which insist on continuing a "law enforcement" approach to drug crime should focus resources on taking down high-level traffickers, rather than arresting everyday drug mules and street dealers

My initial response was an astounding no. However if we was to view it from a more critical view, such as the the success of stopping drug use and the millions of pounds spent on the 'war on drugs'.. I do feel there needs to be some changes. 

"Calls to Legalise Cannabis and Ecstasy" by Guy Adams
http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/politics/calls-to-legalise-cannabis-and-ecstasy-2292485.html



Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Wednesday, May 30, second posting, 7:30 pm

Hello again,

I just received an email from Kayla asking about sources in regards to research for out of class essay 1. Great question. My answer is: any sources that are reliable. This includes books, articles and websites on the Internet, etc.

You may certainly use Wikipedia as a starting point. I know many professors forbid students to even consult Wikipedia. I find that it can offer basic information and more importantly, give the researcher ideas and suggestions for further research locations. In other words, you can certainly consult this site, but you cannot use it as a primary source in the paper. It should not appear on your Works Cited page.
(If the information is on Wikipedia, chances are it is ALSO available elsewhere.)

As far as NUMBER of sources required, use common sense. Utilize as many sources as you find necessary to retrieve the information you need.

Wednesday, May 30th, 5:15 pm

Hello,


A few things...


1. blogger.com has changed their format, so I am working on how install the follower's link.


2. We obviously did not have time for my lecture/discussion on how to critically read an essay. Hopefully, we will fit that in tomorrow, Thursday.


3. Here are the three readings for Packet 2, due to be read by next Tuesday (see course outline).


***"How the Drug War Hurts Everybody" 
http://www.salon.com/2012/04/12/how_the_drug_war_hurts_everyone/


***"Tackling America's Drug Addiction"
http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=127937271
(this is actually an audio--a 4 minute and 50 second interview that was recorded on National Public Radio in June of 2010.)

***"Confessions of a Mom (and a Former Teen Pothead)"
http://www.npr.org/blogs/tellmemore/2010/10/19/130677774/confessions-from-a-mom-and-former-teen-pot-head



4. Here is a copy of Out of Class Essay #1 Assignment, assigned and discussed in class today.



English 20, Section 1
Summer, 2012
Catherine Fraga, Instructor

Out of Class Essay Assignment #1—200 points possible—VOICES AGAINST CONFORMITY

Assigned: Wednesday, May 30
Rough Draft Due (OPTIONAL), typed & double spaced, no later    than Tuesday, June 5
Final Draft Due:  Thursday, June 7, typed & double spaced

***Note that you have eight (8) days to research and write this essay.

Let’s take a closer look at the issue of conformity/non-conformity.

The most interesting, focused and articulate essays I receive from students are ones where students select their own specific topic and are genuinely intrigued by the topic.

For this essay, you will research and write about one person who is/was considered a non-conformist in his/her field of interest. Consider the possibility that the person deemed a non-conformist may not, in your opinion, actually BE a non-conformist. So your essay could support or disprove the label given by the majority of society.

This topic allows for a wealth of flexibility and choice.

Your focus will be on a person working in an area (and time period in history) that you are most interested in: photography; art; literature; politics; film; computers; music; fashion; science; mathematics; education; or ???

To get a better idea of some possibilities, and for purpose of illustration, let’s look at some examples of topics within in the time period of the 1950s in America.

Premise: Many in the 1950s worked diligently for the comfort and conformity displayed on such TV shows as “Father Knows Best” and “Leave it to Beaver.” But regardless of the affluence of the new American middle class, there was still poverty, racism and alienation in America rarely depicted on TV.

Dozens of people rejected societal norms through their artwork, creativity and lifestyle. They used words, art, film and music to rebel against the cookie-cutter mentality of the established power structure and mass-marketed culture.

Many writers during this time period (referred to as the Beat Generation) adamantly refused to submit to the conformity of the 1950s. (these writers included Jack Kerouac, Allen Ginsberg, Diane Di Prima, Sloan Wilson, J.D. Salinger, William Burroughs, and others)

Likewise, many artists during this time period adamantly refused to submit to the conformity of the 1950s. (these artists included Willem De Kooning, Hans Hoffman, Mark Rothko, Jackson Pollock, Clement Greenberg, and others)

Also, according to an Internet article on Conformity in U.S. History: “While the 1950s silver screen lit up mostly with the typical Hollywood fare of Westerns and romances, a handful of films shocked audiences by uncovering the dark side of America’s youth.”

Many filmmakers of this time period adamantly refused to submit to the conformity of the 1950s. (these films include The Wild One; Blackboard Jungle; Rebel without a Cause, etc)

No matter what non conformist you select to research, your essay must contain the following:
·      your working definition of a non-conformist (in order to frame and set up your argument)
·      a brief history of the country’s mood during this time period;
·      background and details about the non-conformist you will focus on, in particular, those that help support your premise;
·      how his/her work challenged the status quo;
·      the impact of his/her work on others in the same field and on society;
·      and the repercussions and influence felt today or what you predict WILL be the repercussions in the future.

Your essay will be both informative and analytical: your thesis will “prove” the person’s influence, or not, on people’s lives, then and now.

Things to Consider:

This is NOT an essay in which you write an in depth analysis of the literature, film, music, fashion, etc. of the time period you are focused on. To do that, you would need to carefully read, view, or listen to the work or material at great length.

Instead, you are conducting research to discover the mood of the country and the status quo during a particular time period——why and how a person’s work was considered non conformist—and how their work influenced those living then…and now.

Your thesis might read something like this:

Although 1950s America appeared to be almost unrealistically content, many visual artists at this time, particularly Jackson Pollack, successfully combated the blissful charade by using innovative methods and themes in his work.

A BRIEF LIST OF TOPIC SUGGESTIONS:
Mahatma Ghandi                                    George Carlin
Martin Luther King, Jr.                        John Cassavetes
Eminem                                                Yves St. Laurent
Georgia O’Keefe                                    Abby Hoffman
Galileo Galilei                                    John Lennon
Emma Goldman                                    David Mamet
Janis Joplin                                                Jim Morrison
Johnny Cash                                                Ralph Nader
Steve Jobs                                                Joan of Arc
Nelson Mandela                                    Che Guevara
Karl Marx                                                Bill Gates
Dr. Jack Kevorkian                                    James  Dean
Quentin Crisp                                    Henry David Thoreau
Ayn Rand                                                Elvis Presley
Carl Jung                                               
Carl Sagan
Alexandr Solzhenitsyn